Mr. Perfect Pitch

https://youtu.be/wjIes1eGAw4


You are LAF, first word LAZY.

Girls, car and fire? That's your idea of a music video?

You are set against taking dance lessons, aren't you? You'd rather stand there like a piece of wood than take my advice.

Also, you can't throw in a few, misogynist sentences that cast the blame on the fictional, cheating girlfriend of a fictional soldier and have that give this repetitive song artistic value.  You have done things like that in some of your other songs, and the result is always strained and sophomoric.

If you want life experiences that give you perspective about things past the entertainment industry's party scene, you can have them; you have the time and the money to volunteer in areas that interest you and to listen to what people whose lives aren't like yours have to say.

When you are born with a gift that most people don't have, you should recognize that the systems that were developed to train other people who have less talent didn't present you with the challenges that you needed.  Perhaps you are continuing a pattern that you picked up when you slept through all of your music classes, and it's already catching up with you, even though you don't know it and nobody who is making money off you knows it or would tell you.

Stop listening to your work with mediocre ears, and stop the disconnect between the audio and visual of what you're publishing.  That video is terrible; I don't know how it could be worse.  You need to train your eye; you don't seem to have a natural affinity for that at all.